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Tuesday, 6 September 2016

The Adams family

4 comments:

  1. I enjoyed reading about how the characters killed the zombie at the end of the story. When you are publishing your writing you don't need to put introduction, p1, p2, p3, conclusion as the readers should already know .

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  2. Hey there i'm Bailey from Gilberthorpes school and I really liked this whole slid but next time you could maybe not put THE END you could go ..... you could also put images.

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